Thursday, May 28, 2015

A Litle Poetry Won't Hurt

            The Wanderer's Song

I have had enough of women, and enough of love,
But the land waits, and the sea waits, and day and night is enough;
Give me a long white road, and the grey wide path of the sea.
And the wind's will and the bird's will, and the heart-ache still in me.

Why should I seek out sorrow, and give gold for Strife?
I have loved much and wept much, but tears and love are not life;
The grass calls to my heart, and the foam to my blood cries up,
And the sun shines and the road shines, and the wine's in the cup.

I have had enough of wisdom, and enough of mirth,
For the way's one and the end's one, and it's soon to the ends of the earth;
And it's then good-night and to bed, and if heels or heart ache,
Well, it's sound sleep and long sleep, and sleep too deep to wake.

.....Now you have the privilege of reading one of my most treasured poems.  Why is it in the top 10 ? Because it strikes a rich chord in my heart.  It chills to the bone.  It beckons a tear in the eye. And, my friends, a poem should be read aloud to catch the music in it...and perhaps it will fire an arrow into your loins. Loins??  Oh, yes, I believe I shall share my top 10 for you.  And the next in line to "The Wanderer's Song" is T.S. Eliot's "Love song of J.Alfred Prufrock," which must be read aloud. And the best time to do that is when you are alone. The first line resonates like a symphony and then takes you on a tour of Prufrock's life.  It's sick. There is no joy in his life...And #3 is "Ae Fond Kiss" with a poor guy who is heartsick and broken hearted by Robert Burns. #4 is Robert Frost's "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening".  This guy has promises to keep and miles to go before he can sleep...a poem filled with symbols.  Work on it. It's notoriously magic.

.....OK. Now I wonder why I have chosen poetry like this?  Why do I love these poems so much? Read my book, "Memoirs of a Tail Gunner". I believe that one can find the answer(s) to these questions embedded in that book which I wrote eight years ago--when I could remember a lot more than I can summon up now--at 91. I do remember though eating six hot dogs with potato salad atop of them at a nickel apiece every Saturday night--like a religious observance.

.....I know that it's been a long time between blogs.  The reason being that I had a battle in a bout of pneumonia.  I just felt dog sick for a long time.  But not to worry because I plan to emulate Methuselah.  (I don't know too much about him except that he is in the Bible. I think.) 


15 comments:

  1. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netMay 28, 2015 at 11:25 PM

    Wow, Baron, what a poem! And it took me quite a long time to track down the author, who turned out to be the Welsh poet Arthur Symons. Never having heard of him, I read up on his biography, and discovered that he was a BIG gap in my knowledge. So thank you for that!
    Yes, that's a wonderful poem, and the other three that you named are also great, but I'm already acquainted with them.
    So sorry you've been ill - and I hope that I may now infer that you are feeling better.
    I will now Google Methuselah, the only fact about him that I know being that he attained many years of life - 369, was it? - that you already appear to know.
    Much love, Cuzzin Ruth

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  2. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netMay 28, 2015 at 11:45 PM

    OK. Methuselah (Genesis 5:21-27) was the grandfather of Noah, and lived for 969 years (sorry, not 369.) Bloody hell, I wouldn't want to live that long. Remember the fate of Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged in Douglas Adams' "Hitch-hiker's Guide to the Galaxy." He got so bored that he developed the hobby of going round the universe in his spaceship, alighting only to insult harmless people, before jumping back into his spaceship and disappearing again. Yuck!
    Cuzzin Ruth

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  4. It's nice to see the blog again! And you must have worked very hard to have such perfect typing (you had mentioned the hands' shaking). When do we hear of #6-10?

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    1. Wow! What can I say? First to Mike: Orange rhymes with Herbstman. Think about it. And my students had to write an essay answering in detail, "If Tears and Love are not Life". then what is? Try again; your first answer is an F. Now to Cuzzin Ruthie: If I live as long as 969 years, I'll forget about Social Security, so forget about it. Now for JR: To write a post to a blog is a daunting task. Read the next blog post to see how I daunted.

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  5. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netMay 30, 2015 at 4:40 PM

    Mmm, this is a hard one, Mike and Baron. Tears and love are not all there is to life by a long chalk: but neither are the subjects of ecstasy subsequently named by the poet. I think we'll allow him a bit of poetic licence here, and agree for the sake of good poesy he is right. However, I find that life is often a lot of humdrum things done for a higher end, like organising and serving my family. Can I quote George Herbert to you?

    "All may of Thee partake
    Nothing can be so mean
    That with this tincture "For Thy sake"
    Will not grow bright and clean.

    A servant with this clause
    Makes drudgery divine:
    Who sweeps a room, as for Thy laws
    Makes that and th'action fine

    We'll allow Herbert a bit of poetic licence too: "for Thy sake" is a phrase, not a clause! But I'm sure that if we analysed our own lives, we'd all find some sense in what Herbert had to say.
    Love to all, Cousin Ruth

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  6. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netMay 30, 2015 at 4:51 PM

    Had another look at Herbert's poem. It's called "The Elixir," and begins
    "Teach me, my God and King
    In all things Thee to see
    That what I do in anything
    To do it as for Thee."
    You see, Baron? You can find God even in that horrible oxygen tent you endured, because you want to be alive and well, for your own sake of course, but also for the sake of your wonderful family.
    Herbert seems to have been a pretty amazing man. A clergyman who managed to steer clear of the religio-political controversies and upheavals of his time? THAT required a considerable amount of self-effacement, and this is confirmed by his refusal to publish his poems except posthumously, through a literary executor. (I'm trying to read a bioggers of GH at the mo, but it's badly written, too adulatory, so I'm struggling to finish it!) Cuz R

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  7. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netMay 30, 2015 at 5:02 PM

    Mike - there are apparently two possible words that rhyme with "orange." The "Blorenge," a river in Wales; and "sporange," an alternative word for "sporangium" or spore-sac. I got them both off Google, but Spell-checker has thrown them both back at me. But what does the Baron mean when he says that "Herbstman" rhymes with "orange?" Is the answer a lemon? Cuz R

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  8. Mikey: As my student, the poet states that he has had "enough" of tears and love - that "day and night is "enough". Check the second line. He finds his god is found in the wonders of land and the sea--in nature. You should have had an education in "poetic symbolism". Look at me, I thought Orange and Mikey also rhyme dumkoff!!

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  9. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netMay 31, 2015 at 11:54 PM

    Baron - I'm confused as to the meaning of your first phrase in that last comment. Who is or was your student? The poet or Mike or exactly who? I assume it was Mike - that makes the most sense, although I didn't know Mike had been your student, I thought he was part of your general circle of friends, now sadly diminished by mortality.
    If it was Mike, then your sentence is suffering from the syntactical error called "ellipsis," which means leaving something vital out, in this case something like "you should know that..."
    When I perform music in public, I make a joke based around this very error. I say: "For those of you who are interested in these matters, this tune is in the Mixolydian mode." (Don't worry about what that is, it's irrelevant to the joke.) "And for those of you who are NOT interested in these matters, it's STILL in the Mixolydian mode." You will see that the joke resides in my having left out something like "I should inform you that.." between the two parts of the first sentence.
    For general interest: there are scales that are neither the Minor or Major, but use different selections of 8 notes from the 13 semitones of the chromatic scale. These, for some ancient and obscure reason calculated to confuse everyone, are called "modes" not "scales." But scales they are. the Mixo. is like a major scale but with a flattened 7th (this last bit of info is for JR, I can't think of any other reader of this blog who might be interested to know this! Joel - if you Google modern tunes in the Mixo., you'll find there are a lot, and you probably know some of them. This means that you will already be familiar with the Mixo., without even knowing what it is! What a miracle music is! ) Love, Cuzzin Ruth

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  10. Ruthie: Mike and I are vaudevillians. My view that orange an Herbstman rhyme is my private joke with him. No one should gather that our comments are reality. We both live on a different planet. And please don't teach me things that I know--such as "ellipsis" and "phrase" and "clause etc. And insofar as music is concerned, you are probably the only one who knows so much--so why take up the room on my blog?. And lastly, we try to leave any reference to "God" out of this blog. I worship Triton rising from the sea blowing his wreathed horn. (This comment belongs following your next one. How they got mixed, I don't know.

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  11. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netJune 1, 2015 at 11:55 PM

    Yup, yup, they are in the proper order and totally comprehensible. Don't worry about references to God: I'm not dogmatic (?godmatic) about concepts of the deity. You are welcome to to worship Triton, that's not a problem for me. It's just that it's impossible to talk about the 17th century poet Herbert without talking about his mindset and beliefs. I think we were talking about what life was about, with reference to "The Wanderer's Song." I was merely pointing out that a lot of life and its satisfactions reside for me in doing humdrum things towards a higher end. "The Elixir" captures this perfectly, albeit using possibly outdated concepts.
    I'm sure you do know about phrases and clauses and ellipsis, but perhaps not all your readers do! And how many people do you know who can make a JOKE based around the error of ellipsis? As for the musical information, sorry if I took up space, but I thought Joel and maybe Robin might be interested in the info. Anyway, I'm glad that the supposed rhyme of "Herbstman" with "orange was a joke, but with its being, as you say, a private joke, it really did need explaining to me, I'm sure you can see that! Much love, Cuzzin Ruth
    PS I've got bad depression at the mo., so please excuse any errors of judgement on what is suitable for comment on this blog: that's what depression does to me, I'm afraid, as well as all the other wretchedness through which it puts me. Much love, R x

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  12. ruth.grimsley@virgin.netJune 1, 2015 at 11:57 PM

    Yup, yup, they are in the proper order and totally comprehensible. Don't worry about references to God: I'm not dogmatic (?godmatic) about concepts of the deity. You are welcome to to worship Triton, that's not a problem for me. It's just that it's impossible to talk about the 17th century poet Herbert without talking about his mindset and beliefs. I think we were talking about what life was about, with reference to "The Wanderer's Song." I was merely pointing out that a lot of life and its satisfactions reside for me in doing humdrum things towards a higher end. "The Elixir" captures this perfectly, albeit using possibly outdated concepts.
    I'm sure you do know about phrases and clauses and ellipsis, but perhaps not all your readers do! And how many people do you know who can crack a JOKE based around the error of ellipsis? As for the musical information, sorry if I took up space, but I thought Joel and maybe Robin might be interested in the info. Anyway, I'm glad that the supposed rhyme of "Herbstman" with "orange" was a joke, but with its being, as you say, a private joke, it really did need explaining to me, I'm sure you can see that! Much love, Cuzzin Ruth
    PS I've got bad depression at the mo., so please excuse any errors of judgement on what is suitable for comment on this blog: that's what depression does to me, I'm afraid, as well as all the other wretchedness through which it puts me. Much love, R x

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  13. You will see the words, "Newer Post" on the very bottom of this 14 comment post! You people are so wordy. Some of this would be better on email. And Mike we are dining at home tonite. And Ruthie, it saddens me to hear you are still battling depression. I had the same problem when I was 49 as you are now. It comes with growing up--or after a war.

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